Comments on: Free Verse Poem http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/ HEY PRADONGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thu, 28 Aug 2008 05:10:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 By: nissazafarkhan http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-17 nissazafarkhan Wed, 02 Apr 2008 21:01:21 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-17 It was good! It was good!

]]> By: yasminasorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-16 yasminasorce Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:56:27 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-16 very good pradinya are you going to adapt it into a song, cuz i didnt understand the Oh Oh Oh part. it was also kinda confusing. Whats in here, is it your heart??? the use of repetition is an awesome idea, but i suggest clearing up your poem, so that the repetition sounds more awesome. other than that, very good, and you conveyed your message very clearly..... yasmina very good pradinya

are you going to adapt it into a song, cuz i didnt understand the Oh Oh Oh part. it was also kinda confusing. Whats in here, is it your heart??? the use of repetition is an awesome idea, but i suggest clearing up your poem, so that the repetition sounds more awesome. other than that, very good, and you conveyed your message very clearly…..

yasmina

]]> By: jessiesorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-15 jessiesorce Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:54:24 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-15 At the end you shouldn't say character, you should say imaginary person. It confused me when you say character. At the end you shouldn’t say character, you should say imaginary person. It confused me when you say character.

]]> By: eemansorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-13 eemansorce Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:26:03 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/04/01/free-verse-poem/#comment-13 Pradinya.... I liked it...but i was confused. Your point of view changes ( I think). Who is he? Who is me? Am I you? Are you someone else? Or just you telling me about him??? Why is it so good in hear. I liked your free verse, something about it was awesome, if i would to compare it to something, it would be listening to a song in a foreign language, liking it but it doesnt make any sense. Does that make sense? :-) aaah ok i confused myself. Pradinya…. I liked it…but i was confused. Your point of view changes ( I think). Who is he? Who is me? Am I you? Are you someone else? Or just you telling me about him??? Why is it so good in hear. I liked your free verse, something about it was awesome, if i would to compare it to something, it would be listening to a song in a foreign language, liking it but it doesnt make any sense. Does that make sense? :-) aaah ok i confused myself.

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