Comments on: Ode To Cookies http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/ HEY PRADONGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thu, 28 Aug 2008 05:10:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 By: orlynsorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-19 orlynsorce Fri, 04 Apr 2008 18:23:45 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-19 It's nice. But the "u"s should be "you"'s and I think their needs to be an ending in sequence. Like eating it. The beginning sounds like a song! "It's crunchy! Munchy! And Chocolaty! I'm cookoo for coco puffs!" It is more fun to sing than to read. It’s nice. But the “u”s should be “you”’s and I think their needs to be an ending in sequence. Like eating it. The beginning sounds like a song! “It’s crunchy! Munchy! And Chocolaty! I’m cookoo for coco puffs!” It is more fun to sing than to read.

]]> By: nasirajohnson http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-11 nasirajohnson Fri, 28 Mar 2008 20:42:56 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-11 C00ki3z R aW3s0m3!!!!! iT wAs A $h0rT bUt niC3.... K33p 0n k33piN' 0n... - Nasira ♥ C00ki3z R aW3s0m3!!!!!
iT wAs A $h0rT bUt niC3….
K33p 0n k33piN’ 0n…

- Nasira ♥

]]> By: jessiesorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-9 jessiesorce Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:51:46 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-9 I made cookies (like a billion times) and it smelled GREAT!!!-jessie I made cookies (like a billion times) and it smelled GREAT!!!-jessie

]]> By: mayasorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-8 mayasorce Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:51:02 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-8 it rhymed a lot, it was good... i thought it was supposed to be at least 30 lines!!!! but otherwise good it rhymed a lot, it was good… i thought it was supposed to be at least 30 lines!!!!

but otherwise good

]]> By: margalitsorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-6 margalitsorce Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:29:01 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-6 I think you are on the right track...good job!! - Margalit :) I think you are on the right track…good job!!

- Margalit :)

]]> By: siobhansorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-4 siobhansorce Fri, 22 Feb 2008 00:37:12 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-4 interesting why a cookie was it by english class when we ate the cookies well i still like it it is soooo...... PRADINYA interesting
why a cookie
was it by english class
when we ate the cookies
well i still like it
it is soooo……
PRADINYA

]]> By: christianlavery http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-3 christianlavery Thu, 21 Feb 2008 21:06:48 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-3 OH IM SO HUNGRY OH IM SO HUNGRY

]]> By: eemansorce http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-2 eemansorce Thu, 21 Feb 2008 20:31:01 +0000 http://pradinyashastri.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/ode-to-cookies/#comment-2 Pradinya, i think you had the right idea going but it was to short, i think you could have done a lot more organizational wise. -Eeman :-) Pradinya, i think you had the right idea going but it was to short, i think you could have done a lot more organizational wise.

-Eeman :-)

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